The Art of Pt. 1: Noticing
- Siena Long

- Sep 1
- 2 min read
a bird sits upon the silence of dawn,
Its colorful wings, like a brushstroke
on the sky's pale canvas.
across the stream,
i bend down to trace,
the spiral of the snail across the path
seeing it in its slow insistence,
a lesson no clock can teach.
The art of noticing is quiet.
the kind that lives in life’s pauses.
the kind that hums beneath the silence
not of absence, but of arrival.
holding still,
without meaning to,
your body remembers
how to listen.
a bird shadow flapping its wings
across the sidewalk.
a girl picking a dandelion in a field of weeds.
There is an art of noticing
not something loud,
but the slow unfolding
of the world
when you stop tugging
at your own.
You feel everything.
all of it.
the rustle of leaves,
the sound of the wind,
the laughter
of people who hide their sorrow.
the way two people
who are strangers
look up
at the same sky,
and for a moment
share it.
an art of noticing
not just the beauty of nature
but the soft edges of people
their weathered roots,
their beautiful absolutes.
the sound
not echoes,
but full,
like the way your breath
lands against my neck,
when you forget
you are breathing.
art of noticing,
how moments fade
faster than the memories are made.
how a glance lingers
longer than words,
a body of water
the reflection of birds.
noticing
not what is there forever,
but to marvel at what appears
and know it could not exist
without this moment.
to notice is to watch time dissolve
let it matter.
to notice
the way someone trembles or softens.
the way a bee moves around a flower,
to love with all the cautions.
noticing is where love begins.
noticing is how grief heals.
noticing is how curiosity grows
after the time froze.
don’t capture it
just witness this.
this moment
this life.
as a reminder
to let it in,
and to see it all fully.
The lines on a palm
that tell a story.
The cracks on the sidewalk
filled with brown or green.
The clouds changing
while we do too
underneath them.
the gaze of understanding
another.
the ability to notice
and see it all,
without flinching.
that is what it becomes.
not just the art
not even the noticing,
just
see.




This poem is fire!! 🔥